Script Development
"There is no such thing as a bad script - just a great script that needs a lot of work."
As well as lecturing, Paul offers various packages to support fellow writers of comedy and drama.
Readers Report - £30 / £40
Sometimes you get so close to your work that you can't see what works and what doesn't. Sometimes stepping away from your script helps to de-fuzz your brain but often the most valuable help comes from a fresh pair of eyes. Using his experience in script development Paul will provide you with a three page 'Reader's report' on your completed half hour sitcom (£40 for hour format or feature) and provide invaluable notes, constructive criticism and the way forward. Topics reported on include premise, character, narrative and dialogue.
Development Package - £120
If you have an idea and want support through all those difficult phases then Paul offers this exclusive development package. This includes:
- Two 'Reader's Reports' (after first and second drafts)
- A 1 hr phone consultation
- A 4 hr face to face consultation
NB: This feedback can be specifically tailored to suit your particular creative needs.
For more information on any of these packages contact paul@seriouslywise.co.uk






